My life...is this good enough? I need your help to check the mistakes I have. I'm in elementary level. Thanks for your help. I graduated from University in 2006. I am AN accountant. I work at Medicine University in the administration section and I started the university until now. In my school and university I was always a good student with good califications. I still continue my studies, because is very important for me. I am study English and Postgraduate in auditori in the University. In my work I attend many people very good so they can feel very comfortable. I work from Monday until Friday at 07 am and 2 pm. Every Monday I am travel at 3 pm to Cielo's city, because I teaching accounted in the University, I return at 12 pm; on Tuesday and Thursday I study English in the BBY school at 6pm at 8 pm; Wednesday I teaching in the University in my city at 6:30 pm at 9:15 pm. Friday in the night and Saturday in the morning I am study in my University National of East Postgraduate. In the week I have work and study. In the Saturday afternoon I sleep because very tired, in the night I am going out diner with my family or my boyfriends, or my friends, or go to the Party depending on the situation. In Sunday I like to cook in my home with my parents and I am go to the cinema. In my free time I like practices football with my friends, special in the sprint and summer. I love go Hairdresser's shop in my free time too. I traveled for many countries when I was teenager, I visit USA and Mexico in 1997 because my birthday, Chile in 1998 with classmate the school, Italy in 2000 I visit the Papa Juan Pablo II, Germany, French, Belgium and Bruxelas in 2005 I visit the Papa Benedict XVI. Frequency in vacation in summer I am go to Brazil with my family. It was very special for me to know these countries; because it is very important to know different cultures and people. It was the better thing that I spend in my life, thanks my parents. Now I am happy because I have a baby. My boyfriend is happy too. I am thinking married and form a good family. In the future, I would like some day to live in USA, because I like so much, and traveling around the world visit many countries with my family. Thanks for listen my life…
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I graduated from a University in 2006. I am an accountant. I work at a Medicine University in the administration section and I started the university until now. In my school and university, I was always a good student with good clarifications. I still continue my studies, because they are very important to me. I am studying English and Postgraduate in auditory in the University. In my job many good people attend sot they feel very comfortable. I work from Monday until Friday 07 am until 2 pm. Every Monday I travel at 3 pm to Cello’s city, because I am teaching the accounted in the University, I return at 12 pm; on Tuesday and Thursday I study English in the BBY school at 6pm at 8 pm; Wednesday I teach at the University in my city at 6:30 pm at 9:15 pm. Friday at night and Saturday in the morning I am studying at my National University of East Postgraduate. During the week, I have to work and study. On Saturday afternoon I sleep because I am very tired, at night I am going out diner with my family or my boyfriends, or my friends, or go to the Party depending on the situation. On Sunday I like to cook at home with my parents and I am going to the cinema. In my free time I like to practice football with my friends, especially in the spring and summer. I love go to the Hairdresser's shop in my free time too. I traveled too many countries when I was a teenager, I visited USA and Mexico in 1997 because it was my birthday, Chile in 1998 with classmates from the school, Italy in 2000 I visited Papa Juan Pablo II, Germany, French, Belgium and Brunel’s in 2005 I visit Papa Benedict XVI. Frequently on summer vacations, I go to Brazil with my family. It was very special for me to know these countries; because it is very important to know different cultures and people. It was the best thing that I spent in my life, thanks to my parents. Now I am happy because I have a baby. My boyfriend is happy too. I am thinking about getting married and forming a good family. In the future, I would like to live in the USA, because I like it so much, and travelling around the world and visiting many countries with my family. Thanks for listening to my life.
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I am an accountant and graduated from University in 2006. I work at THE Medicine University in the administration DEPARTMENT, I HAVE WORKED HERE SINCE I FINISHED MY DEGREE. DURING MY YEARS AT school and university I was always a HARDWORKING student with good GRADES. I HAVE CONTINUED TO studY, because EDUCATION IS very important to me. I am studying English and DOING A Postgraduate in auditori ??AT the University. In my work I DEAL WITH many people AND TRY TO HELP THEM AND MAKE THEM feel comfortable. I work from Monday TO Friday FROM 7am TILL 2 pm. Every Monday I travel to Cielo's city at 3 pm AS I AM teaching AccountING AT the University, I return at 12 pm on Tuesday. ON Thursday I study English in the BBY school FROM 6pm TILL 8 pm; Wednesday I teach AT the University in my city FROM 6:30 pm TILL 9:15 pm. Friday NIGHTS and Saturday morningS I study FOR my Postgraduate AT THE University National of East . DURING the week I have work and study. Saturday afternoon I sleep because I AM SO very tired, AT night I GO out FOR diner with my family or WITH my boyfriend or WITH my friends, or SOMETIMES I go to A Party depending on the situation. ON Sunday I like to cook in my home with my parents and THEN I go to the cinema. In my free time I like TO PLAY football with my friends, ESPECIALLY in the sprinG and summer. I ALSO love TO go TO THE Hairdresser. When I was A teenager, I travelLed IN many countries. I visitED THE USA and Mexico in 1997 FOR my birthday, Chile in 1998 with classmateS FROM MY school, Italy in 2000. I visitED the Papa Juan Pablo II, Germany, FRANCE, Belgium and Bruxelas(brussels?). IN 2005 I visitED the Papa Benedict XVI. OFTEN in summer I GO ON A VACATION TO Brazil with my family. It was very special for me to VISIT these countries, because it is very important to LEARN ABOUT different cultures and people .I WAS VERY LUCKY, thanks TO my parents. Now I am VERY happy because I have a baby. My boyfriend is happy too. I am thinking OF GETTING married and HAVING a good family. In the future, I would like to live in THE USA, because I like IT so much, and I WANT TO travel around the world AND visit many countries with my family. Thanks for listenING TO my life…
